

Broken Verses of TheeBroken Verses of TheeBroken Verses of Thee
Dawn to dusk and dusk to thee
The winds whisper thy memory
Eve to morn and morn to me
Open these pages and thou may see
In the mind's eye of silent rue
Thoughts to pen and pen to cue
Sorrow and soul become one
Immersed in grief and all be done
Though I turn to face the sun
At times words are hard to come
A tear's cadence upon the page
Brings not the heart to woe engage
How might I acutely scribe of thee
Thou who hath walked my destiny
With dimples fair as twilight sun
And eyes


Twilight YearningTwilight YearningTwilight Yearning
Dusks whisper foregone days
Little trinkets of memories
Winds carry withered blooms
From your silent heart to me
Where covetous bliss lingered
Now shades of grey remain
Summers of long gone past
Adrift to autumn lain
No more the hues of hope
In eyes of dappled tears
Solemn goodbyes sigh
When lonely nights are near
Once more my sorrows flow
Onto pages pristine white
Another eve forgone
My weary soul in flight
(C) SnoWryTeR xiaoDan


Twilight BluesTwilight BluesTwilight Blues
Sorrows encumbered forlorn eyes
Reproach the eves of love gone by
Dreams once cast in brilliant hues
Reflect to sunset's song of rue
Stand atop grief's beleaguered hill
As memories' swells rise and swill
Starlit escapades connecting hearts
Faded journeys to time depart
A murmur soft to soothe thy sleep
As despair cleaves unto the deep
Hath the dusk in thy stead cried
On pain's wavelets the soul betides
Lone leaf adrift to twilight blues
Invokes foregone grace of two
Will as the lonely night


Winter of DawnWinter of DawnWinter of Dawn
Retrospective before the rising dawn
Yet in my heart the shades are drawn Perchance once my soul did fly But now all dreams and hopes have died Because of you, my dream catcher My stardom and sunset watcher Who bestowed me a beautiful sunrise The spring of love that bloomed in my eyes
But now as I walk the rousing morn I wonder for whom the dewdrops adorn My tears that linger on withered buds To shed with time as dust and mud Petals waft as spring dies in my eyes Again I wake, to a faded sunrise Lonely and adrift in
Devious Comments
Excellent work!
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"Prithee, take wing, floral sprite."
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Anyone can accomplish rhyme. It takes skill to lace sound. Well done. Keep crafting...and give some forms a try. It may help wrangle in your talent.
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I write entirely to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want and what I fear.
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